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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #30 on: February 05, 2008, 09:34:39 pm »
First up, D&K's Rated R Productions Volume 1 to 3. Very good and liked how you two named each scene after certain movies or shows. Excellent work, you two.

Now for Vintage's More Then a Kiss Good Night parts 1 and 2, well done but could've spaced the scrunched up paragraphs out a bit more but that's just me. Other then that, good work dude.

thanks for the feedback...and spacing will happen for the next part...

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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #31 on: April 21, 2008, 10:47:26 am »
Just read the WWE's newest agency, its really good and can't wait for the next chapter.
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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #32 on: April 21, 2008, 02:04:09 pm »
Thanks for the feedback, DR?. The next chapter will probably be Ashley, or maybe Kelly Kelly.  

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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #33 on: April 21, 2008, 04:36:09 pm »
Just read

The Phenomenal Cougar -  by DarklordZ great
TNA Backstage Part 1: Karen Angle - by ElevatorXtreme its really good
The WWE's Newest Agency Part 1 -  by ElevatorXtreme   its really good
Maria Gets A Little Horny -  by Dice & Kristi   great

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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #34 on: April 21, 2008, 05:01:05 pm »
Just read

The Phenomenal Cougar -  by DarklordZ great
TNA Backstage Part 1: Karen Angle - by ElevatorXtreme its really good
The WWE's Newest Agency Part 1 -  by ElevatorXtreme   its really good
Maria Gets A Little Horny -  by Dice & Kristi   great


Thanks! Dice and I were a little nervous at first to do a story with Hornswoggle, we weren't sure how the reader's would react, but it's awesome that you enjoyed it!

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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #35 on: April 21, 2008, 07:58:40 pm »
First, thanks Batista999, as Kristi said, we're glad that you enjoyed Maria Gets A Little Horny.

Now onto the other fics that I had time to read and I'll keep this short and sweet lol

Great job and keep up the good Nero, DarkLordz, ElevatorXtreme, Y2Curry, Dr Rock, Cangle MTL and DaxG2001. Their stories are really worth checking out for a lot of different reasons.

Favorite story of the update, I'd have to give it to Nero's Lights, Cameras, Stratusfaction Part 3.
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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #36 on: April 21, 2008, 09:06:39 pm »
Thanks for props Dice. I personally didn't like the story, but glad some people did.

Didn't read to many stories yet, but I liked "One For The Highlight Reel". Would be cool to see it evolve into a series.

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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #37 on: April 21, 2008, 09:19:42 pm »
This feedback goes to... Dice and Kristi.

Foe To Partners: really great work here you two, just great work period.

Maria Gets A Little Horny: After Dice said that Hornswoggle was getting some, I wondered how that would work and this really worked. Really excellence work here.

Rated R Productions Volume 4: One of the things that I enjoy about this are the names of the shows or movies that are in.  Again, good work you two.
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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #38 on: April 22, 2008, 03:33:01 am »
Oh yes I'm an Edge-Head. How can you not be?  ;D

As for feedback, Rated R Productions Volume 4: Not sure what happened there but the wrong diva's were listed on it. But I still read it and it was still awesome. Keep up the good work :D Can't wait for part 5!
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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #39 on: April 22, 2008, 01:27:06 pm »
Thanks, Nero and Dice.  Glad you enjoyed it!

Haven't read all of the stories yet, but I enjoyed Welcome To The WWE Part 25: Katie Lea Burchill.  Santino's dialogue was hilarious.  

Also liked Not So Innocent.  I've always had a thing for Molly, and wish she was in stories more often.
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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #40 on: April 26, 2008, 12:38:22 am »
I really enjoyed the Cena/Victoria pairing in the Rated Rproductions series. I can't explain why I liked that pairing so much.

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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #41 on: April 26, 2008, 01:21:34 am »
Thanks PNight...

And for those wondering, PNight is refering to Rated R Productions Vol. 6, which is not quite on Wowefa yet, he just got an advance chance to read it. So you didn't miss anything  ;D
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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #42 on: April 26, 2008, 09:05:18 am »
thats good

I hope people like the two stories I submitted for the next update for only my third and fourth story, I think they're quite good and well written

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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #43 on: April 26, 2008, 08:55:26 pm »
As for feedback, Rated R Productions Volume 4: Not sure what happened there but the wrong diva's were listed on it. But I still read it and it was still awesome. Keep up the good work :D Can't wait for part 5!

My bad! I thought I changed the names after I cut and pasted the code. It's fixed now. Sorry, D+K!
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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #44 on: April 26, 2008, 08:59:49 pm »
As for feedback, Rated R Productions Volume 4: Not sure what happened there but the wrong diva's were listed on it. But I still read it and it was still awesome. Keep up the good work :D Can't wait for part 5!

My bad! I thought I changed the names after I cut and pasted the code. It's fixed now. Sorry, D+K!

No problem Doc.... the little mix-up just let peopke know who's in Volume 5  ;D
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