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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #15 on: November 27, 2007, 01:18:27 pm »
*Ego inflates* Cheers for the heads up guys, I'll double check my current work in progress now and edit them. So Cal Val will indeed be next, then it'll be Gail Kim then I was going to include some of the new Knockouts.
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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #16 on: December 09, 2007, 12:47:15 pm »
Dice and Kristi;s Blond series is awesome, I strangely enjoyed the Punk/Torrie pairing for some reason.

Mickie get what hers is also a terrific series.

Havent read Rock's or Nero's stuff yet but so far so good.

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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #17 on: December 09, 2007, 01:27:00 pm »
Thank's PNight, I'll pass that along to Kristi
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« Reply #18 on: December 09, 2007, 07:34:05 pm »
Just finished going through the updated stories and well done to all for their work.

That's all I need to say.

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« Reply #19 on: December 25, 2007, 10:36:39 am »
Dice and Kristi - Laying The SmackDown On ECW - Great story. I haven't had much time to read fanfic in a while but I thought, "Sod it, It's Christmas day, if I don't make myself scarce and have a wank I'll have to stuff the turkey."

Very hot!

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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #20 on: January 27, 2008, 03:31:08 pm »
In my opinion, Y2Curry's third installement of Fate Of An Angel is the best story in the update not written by myself and Kristi (because I don't review our own work).

Vintage, Nero Rain MTL's stories are well written, but just don't hold my interest because of their content and are worth checking out.

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« Reply #21 on: January 27, 2008, 03:37:12 pm »
thanks lol...

that was my first story...and part 2 got submitted late I guess but its cool...

anyone else have feedback on my story?

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« Reply #22 on: January 27, 2008, 04:01:09 pm »
Thanks a ton Dice!  Glad you liked it.

As soon as I saw there was a new chapter of Booked Solid posted, I promptly went to work on that.  I read it all in one shot, and now I have a monster headache.  Damn you and your addictive stories, Nero!  It was a good read.

Because of previously mentioned headache, I haven't read any of the other new stories yet.  I'll be back with my thoughts on some of them at a later time.

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« Reply #23 on: January 27, 2008, 04:16:36 pm »
Finished reading the Rumble gang bang...my prediction was wrong...I picked Kelly, and she got 2nd...lol

great story guys

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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #24 on: January 27, 2008, 04:22:15 pm »
Thanks Vintage, to be fair, the winner and runner-ups were deteremined way back in... August lol
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« Reply #25 on: January 27, 2008, 04:28:15 pm »
Thanks Vintage, to be fair, the winner and runner-ups were deteremined way back in... August lol

aw man...well I know who is gonna win next time...you guys have been following a pattern with the winners...but if there is one for next year, I expect more greatness...

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« Reply #26 on: January 30, 2008, 11:05:08 pm »
Y2Curry, its great to see you back in action with Fall Of An Angel 4. Good stuff! As for suggestion of who you should have appear next; Francine, Daffney Unger/Lucy Furr, Allison Danger, Dawn Marie, Joy Giovanni and Amy Weber.

Revolution, I loved your Velvet Love Productions stories. As for who to appear next, I'd go with So Cal Val. Her reasoning could be that she wants more exposure beyond brief glimpses of her as ring girl. With you doing different porn catagories a lesbian scene is due with both Angel and Talia. You've been teasing us with Talia long enough. She needs to get in front of the camera.

After that... Crystal Louthan.
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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #27 on: February 01, 2008, 01:51:13 am »
Thanks, Talia will be involved soon.  I have a couple different ideas for her. ;)  I can't say for sure who will be next but I'm glad you like the series so far.
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« Reply #28 on: February 04, 2008, 09:48:14 pm »
First up, D&K's Rated R Productions Volume 1 to 3. Very good and liked how you two named each scene after certain movies or shows. Excellent work, you two.

Now for Vintage's More Then a Kiss Good Night parts 1 and 2, well done but could've spaced the scrunched up paragraphs out a bit more but that's just me. Other then that, good work dude.
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Re:Story Feedback
« Reply #29 on: February 04, 2008, 10:00:42 pm »
Thanks for the DarkLordz, we're actually about 85% done Volume 4 and because of some very positive feedback, we have something awesome (in my view) lined up for Volume 5
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