Author Topic: Latest Update: Praise And Feedback 2016  (Read 4546 times)

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Re: Latest Update: Praise And Feedback 2016
« Reply #15 on: November 27, 2016, 10:22:45 am »
Gotham: 2 Girls, 1 Butler - Silver and Selena are taken advantage of by Alfred. Well written, sexy story with an interesting plot. The dialogue and characterisation are spot on. A

Wonder Woman: Dave And The Alien TV Part 1 - the second one by Muhabba is much more tongue in cheek, and whilst its amusing the sex seems a little rushed and with little detail. Still any story which starts of with an alien who looks like a character from American Dad explaining the anal probe gets some points added on. B+ (for making me laugh)

Amy Farrah Fowler, Queen Of The Night - this could have been weird but interesting. It's not, there's little story and little sex. C+

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Re: Latest Update: Praise And Feedback 2016
« Reply #16 on: February 12, 2017, 07:35:42 am »
Just saw the latest stories. Some great work there !
Thanks to all who contributed  :)