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Re: Latest Update: Praise And Feedback 2014
« Reply #30 on: September 04, 2014, 10:13:13 am »
Muhabba's Astonishing X-Men series: Phenomenal. There's not a lot of story series I look forward to on CSSA/TSSA, but this is now one of them.
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Re: Latest Update: Praise And Feedback 2014
« Reply #31 on: September 05, 2014, 06:02:53 pm »
E-mail from Money:

Hi, Since I can't reach TRL or 313 you can pass along this praise for the latest "Hellcats" season chapter.
 
Most excellent work on the series enjoyed the chapter as a whole yet enjoyed the many storylines twisted inside it as well loved Marti and Demi scenes very much the visual of Marti coming out of the pool was fantastic the dark room scene was just as good though I kept wanting to see a pic of Marti where she was floating on top of the water on her back that Demi shot during the photoshoot and the pic and negative went missing for a future story plot twist if it is useable somehow just throwing that out there.
 
Adding Debby Ryan as a character was genius looking forward to more antics with her at Lancer as well.
 
Overall loved the antics and sex scenes makes me wonder what else is up the sleeves looking forward to the next "episode".
 
I did some checking of possible celebs that could be featured down the road that have a cheerleader/gymnastics background or have looked good in a cheerleader outfit so here goes
 
Olivia Holt/ Cheerleader
 
Kelli Berglund/ Cheerleader
 
Peyton Roi List/ Cheerleader
 
Paris Berelc/ Gymnastics
 
Maia Mitchell/ Cheerleader (possible exchange student storyline)
 
Victoria Justice/ Cheerleader
 
Jamie Lynn Spears/ Cheerleader summer intern storyline?
 
Daniella Monet/ Cheerleader
 
Anyway, take care and I'll talk to ya soon.

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Re: Latest Update: Praise And Feedback 2014
« Reply #32 on: October 26, 2014, 01:43:34 pm »
Stacy's Mom Has Got It Going On by Muhabba
A+!!!
Can remember this music video vividly, the daughter interested me as much (possibly more) than the mom. So glad to see it made into a story, and of such amazing quality. Thank you for this.

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Re: Latest Update: Praise And Feedback 2014
« Reply #33 on: December 05, 2014, 02:41:15 pm »
Friends:  Ross and Monica Incest Story by Triable Cacus:  Flat characterization, stilted writing and by-the-numbers sex scene:  D

Stacy's Mom Has Got It Going On; by  Muhabba:  Now this is the polar opposite.  Good characterization, witty writing and sex that if it were written on paper it would set it on fire.  A slight nitpick, the songs lyrics say that Stacy's dad is "gone" so either he ran off or they're divorced  but that's tiny:  A+
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Re: Latest Update: Praise And Feedback 2014
« Reply #34 on: December 05, 2014, 04:07:38 pm »
Lyrics actually say since your dad walked out your mom could use a guy like me.
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